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Hi Reader

Ramit Sethi talks about how someone once asked a well-known information product marketer:

โ€œWhoโ€™s going to read a 20-page landing page?โ€

He laughed.

โ€œYeah, no one willโ€ฆ except the buyers.โ€

That line stuck with me.

Because itโ€™s true.

Buyers: the ones leaning in: donโ€™t want just a headline.

They want details. They want specifics.


And yes:

Simple before-and-after ads still work.

  • They give proof.
  • They make it tangible.
  • They show a transformation.
  • They create a moment of clarity: โ€œI want that.โ€

But the best-performing ads go beyond the highlight reel.

..beyond the 'instant' transformation.

They show the middle.


Why?

Because the middle is what makes the transformation believable.

Itโ€™s where:

โœ… The struggle lives

โœ… The doubt creeps in

โœ… The small-but-real wins appear

Most brands skip that.

They show Step 1 and Step 10: and hope the audience fills in the rest.

Because they think users will be impressed by amazing transformations.

That can work if you are showing a movie or entertainment.

But the buying brain doesnโ€™t work that way.

Buyers want to know:

โ€œCould someone like me actually do this? How??! I need details."

Showing the messy middle answers that.

It gives context.

It builds trust.

And yes: it converts.

(even if you dont take it to 20 pages of copy).


Thatโ€™s why some of our top-performing ads show the progression, the process. Here is an example structure...

โœ… Day 1: โ€œI wasnโ€™t sure if this would workโ€ฆโ€

โœ… Day 7: โ€œStill messy, but I stuck with it.โ€

โœ… Day 14: โ€œSomething shifted.โ€

โœ… Day 30: โ€œIt finally clicked.โ€

Not showing an 'instant transformation'

but showing the 'messy middle'.

showing the d7 uncertainty.

Showing the progress.

Not polished.

Not perfect.

But true.

And truth sticks.


If youโ€™re spending $50k+/month and want creative that goes beyond โ€œbefore-afterโ€โ€ฆ

โ€ฆand actually gets into the messy middle - to be believed, clicked, and scaled...

Reply with โ€œJOURNEYโ€ and Iโ€™ll show you how we apply this structure across every possible vertical to help unlock massive scale.

Later,

Shamanth

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